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the beast and the mosh pit
 

the beast and the mosh pit

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The evil that lurks in all men rears its ugly head at a Rage Against the Machine concert.

(This is actually an old fictional story I wrote about my brother and I.)

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The Beast and The Most Pit is around 2,600 words.

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We were in the pit for about twenty seconds when I lost track of my brother. I looked around and was starting to get concerned, but then I spotted him about thirty feet away. He had a vicious look about him, he was really getting into it. Even with bodies jumping all around me I was able to get a good look at his face and I found it pretty scary. I’d never seen him so angry. But, hey, that’s what the mosh pits are all about, I guess.

The band had progressed through their set list and was currently blasting Bullet in the Head. I had managed to keep an eye on my brother while in the pit, but after around ten minutes I began making my way to the outer perimeter of the moshing area. I was sweating like a pig and starting to feel claustrophobic. I had to get out of there.

That was when I saw the devil.

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Date: 11.21.2008

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